Deep in the Night

Deep in the Night

A Poem by JayceeC
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Song Lyrics for lost love

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They say that there's one true love
In every life
Thought I had it all with you
That we'd done everything right.
Then you said that you were leaving
You didn't love me anymore
There was nothing left to say
When you walked out the door

Chorus
But deep in the night 
your memory haunts me 
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold

So I decided to go out
Try to find somebody new
he was a friend of a friend
And knew just what I'd been through
You know, we had a good time
And the next thing I knew
It was time for that first kiss
but all I thought of was you

Chorus
And deep in the night 
your memory haunts me 
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold

Bridge
So I'll search in every face
For that love that's meant to last
Because I know there's someone out there
Who'll put your memory in the past
Yes,I know that when I find him
Beside him I will stay
'cause it'll only take a little kiss
to sweep your memory away

Chorus
Still deep in the night 
your memory haunts me 
Waking me up
from dreams that won't let go
Deep in the night
Your memory taunts me
so I'll search for someone else
To break your memory's hold

© 2015 JayceeC


Author's Note

JayceeC
This is a slow song, country crossover style...
Just give me your thoughts... I know its hard to judge a song when you can't here the lyrics.

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Words are great. But you are right hard to judge the song without hearing the music to go whith it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JayceeC

9 Years Ago

Yes Michele, it is very difficult. Generally I just look to see if people connect with the basic th.. read more
Beautiful piece and I felt it deeply. I must say that first lover or second or the last, each will leave an impression on your life. When going separate ways words of hate and no love are spoken, but there was a time and there was a moment that will always remind you of past love and why you held each other close.

See that's what you bring out of me from your work. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JayceeC

9 Years Ago

That's a pretty high compliment. I like the idea of my work inspiring something in you!
Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

If I do not feel which may be just a smile, I feel empty after reading a piece of work. Yours did co.. read more
So, I think in our life everyone has one romantic love rather another.It stays in desire, we never can reach it else we lose our desire in love. Since we have that beloved person we lose our desire. We can just live with him in love but not in desire. I think it's like a test from our God in order to live all our life in desire to see Him in beyond life. In my last book The Truth behind Romantic Love I try to give my opinion about the purpose of the logning in Romatic Love. Thank for sharing this wonderful poem. I like each word of it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JayceeC

9 Years Ago

thank you so much for taking the time and leaving such an insightful message.
but you can hear the lyrics,i can see a top 10

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

but never learned to punc correctly,to lazy to study lol
JayceeC

9 Years Ago

Lol..okay I'll give you this one...you win..I was too lazy to me.orize the periodic table or anythin.. read more
 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for your understanding
Definitely hard to judge when you can't hear it but the lyrics are awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


JayceeC

9 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron for putting up with my lyric blitz.

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Added on April 28, 2015
Last Updated on May 4, 2015
Tags: Lost Love, haunted, memories

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