Whispers

Fibonacci

Warm
Breath
Covers
Milky skin
Warming me inside
Suffusing my body with joy.
Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee.
Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Jan, as usual you always hit all the right G-Spots!
G of course stands for Good Grammars ;) your semi erotic
Writes are all too similar to a roller coaster , long lines
But worth the wait, and when it's all done, hair all messy
Stuff;) thanks for sharing!

[JayceeC]

Well I was going for something a bit on the pv rsting but recieved a G instead {:-D).I'll try to tell the muse to speed the line up for you EG...lol

[wordman]

sounds like a special moment

[JayceeC]

Thanks for commenting. Sorry there's no music.

[wordman]

i have a library full,your welcome

[Perkele.7885]

Did you know that my tongue is ambidextrous? It can do it's part in the whispering while available for more urgent things. Just saying! This was a great poem for candlelight and love songs that are never out of date!

[JayceeC]

Oh my, Raj! Not sure that ambidextrous is wuite right...maybe multi-talented...lol. You keep it in practice do you?..;-)

[Perkele.7885]

Left-right, left-right, halt! Make like a turkey tongue!

[JayceeC]

Lolololololol {:-D) Now I need to scrub that image from my brain...lol

[Destiny Dreamer]

Amazing work. I love the feelings. Great Poem

[JayceeC]

Thank you Dreamer

[....................]

A creative approach to the Fibonacci sequence. I first counted the words but realized, just seconds ago, it is the syllabic count you have followed. A very clever write, indeed.

[JayceeC]

Yes..the 13 line could be counted as 12 or 13 depending on whether you give the word every two or three syllables. And yes needs three more on last line. Thats what I get for writing so early in my morning...will fix.

[....................]

:) still, a wonderful sentiment hat leaves one warm!

[JayceeC]

Fibonacci is about syllable count..my last line was wrong when you first looked at it. Writing before AM cofee not good for the brain.

[....................]

:) It's always better with coffee!!