You Dear

A Fibonacci of Love to my husband-He "proposed" to this song

You,

Dear,

Own me

Heart and soul

Body and Spirit.

My love is yours for the taking;

Openly and freely, I gave you them long ago

When you took my hand, and we promised before all to honor and cherish forever.

Forever will never be long enough to return the Heart Joys your love created within me, nor to express all that is in my heart.

Reviews

[Carrie.]

I've never seen this form before. It's intriguing.

Adorable love story. Forever is never long enough.

[CD Campbell]

Nice sentiment. Good stepping stone before really playing with the form. The actual structure is appealing to the eye. Hope you do another in this style. CD

[JayceeC]

I like the structure will probably do an 8 line next time.. Will fit better..and may use a topic that echos the form...something from nature..at least in metaphor/

[CD Campbell]

Sounds good.

[wordman]

and a beautiful tribute to your love,where`s the video

[JayceeC]

okay word, you can check it out. read the new authors note for why this song.

[wordman]

and a good song it is

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of thoughts in the Fibonacci. You create true emotion and willingness to know happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[JayceeC]

Thanks you for reading and reviewing. Welcome to my pages! ~J

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. You are a talented writer.

[Robert]

Nicely done. I really liked the flow of the poem.

[JayceeC]

Thanks you Robert. I appreciate the comment. ~J