Exhuming Love

The other side of relationships

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I'm buried  Six feet under the lies,  A casualty to your version of reality.  Here's a hammer and a shovel.  Either nail the coffin, or  Exhume the truth.  Just be careful not to fall  Into this grave you dug  So carelessly for love

Author's Note

An older write, but this was a rant, when things were not going well in my marriage.

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. The artwork gave life to your words.
"I'm buried
Six feet under the lies,
A casualty to your version of reality. "
Hard to unburied things lost. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adamas]

Ok honestly I like it. Simple, too the point.
This reminds me of my relationship with my ego self at it's worst.
A part of me is narcissist. I know, i realize the problem I am trying to work on it, so when I read this it reminds me of myself, my true self I lost and am trying to find.
To the point, it touches my soul. Sorry, you wanted more in depth review but this site is a pain for mtmy keyboarskeyboardkeyboarkeyboakeybokeyb, my keyboard, can you twlltwltw, tell? No idea why. And its a pain. Thank you for sharing.

[JayceeC]

I'm never disappointed when someone tells me how they connect to my work. I find that fascinating, because everyone connects differently based on their own experiences and life. Don't get too worried about the keyboard thing..trust me when I review from my phone the typing sucks and I can only see about one line of the box at a time. Don't fight yourself too much ~Jan {;-D}

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Wonderful piece of some one disapointed of love. well done. Thanks for sharing

[JayceeC]

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.