Vampiric Love

Vampire guy loves his wife, who almost dies, she awakens from sleeping to find she was in a coma and the guy and his wife then get captured and murdered

The bloodsucker of love was left behind

while the love of his life went out to dine

she never came back despite his cries

even when the moon was full and the angels cried

with others left behind blind and confused

the woman that loved him was awakened but split in two

the hearts of them ached, the ground under them shacked

and all that was left was a couple that had been staked.

Author's Note

First time writing in a while, thoughts?

Reviews

[Average person]

shaked* lol but pretty awesome :)