Cant Shake this Feeling

Cant Shake this Feeling

A Poem by Jeremy Tims

I cant shake this feeling. This feeling that longs for her. Contemplating what I should say to bring her closer. Time can only help so much due to her looks. With that said she is everyone desires and fantasy. Her eyes glance my way, I smile to show her I notice her and always have. From the day I have known her shes always helped. Shes amazing, but something that must be cared for right.

© 2015 Jeremy Tims


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This is really nice writing :) There's passion and sincere emotion in your words. You definitely paint a beautiful picture with this poem. Looking forward to reading more of your work, friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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There are grammatical issues; I suggest rereading this.

Overall, this was written well.

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on April 24, 2015
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Jeremy Tims
Jeremy Tims

Boutte, LA



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I have been writing for a while now. I started writing bout 10 years ago. Writing is the only thing that release some of the emotional build up. Also Drawing does the same. I do many things other than.. more..

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