Through The Sky

Rest upon the shore,

North at my core,

From the terrace,

I see your door,

Beyond the sun,

My reveries surface,

Abandon all hope,

And I walk through,

Search the wind,

His clouds smile upon me,

Lightening the dark,

I fall apart,

Wander the sand,

Smell your hand,

The existence, the essence,

Beyond all comprehension, 

I look at the sky with not hope,

But question.

Reviews

[hunglikejesus]

this reminds me a lot of me and I like that. It reads graceful, I enjoyed reading it, thank you.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem, like especially the line smell your hand, cute and romantic,a poem in which all the parts fit together,good rhymes and structure.

this is so beuatiful, such a wonderful read

[Heather Clayton]

Makes you ponder a lot about life and what is material vs. fantasy. I really enjoyed it.

[de-oblitus]

I love the ending of this, it said so much.