Through The Sky

Rest upon the shore,

North at my core,

From the terrace,

I see your door,

Beyond the sun,

My reveries surface,

Abandon all hope,

And I walk through,

Search the wind,

His clouds smile upon me,

Lightening the dark,

I fall apart,

Wander the sand,

Smell your hand,

The existence, the essence,

Beyond all comprehension, 

I look at the sky with not hope,

But question.

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

I think many of people have looked to the sky in question...Why things are? Why we are? A very thought provoking piece. You have a true talent with words ^_~

[Owlgirl]

This was an amazing deep and meaninful poem, very well written and exceptional. Your word choice was spectacular and amazing. Good job!

[Odayin]

This is one of the poems that have great imagery and can make you think. I don't know about the other readers, but I had put myself in the position of the story. You had a great meaning and the words sounded so nice together. Keep it up

[Maan]

Meaningful simple words.

[Sel Whiteley]

What a sensitively drawn poem with such classic symbolism fused throughout, very clever indeed.

[Cass]

Nice read, your poems stays together well. Unlike mine :(

[Brittany]

Beautiful imagery and words.

[To be scene To be heard..]

Great imagery. Nice flow of the words. Beautiful poem

[Cathy Wattam]

I love this! Wonderful imagery and beautifully flowing words. I particularly love the ending. Great stuff.