Do You Remember Me?

More of a monologue than a poem but I didn't see that option. It's a little depressing but this is something a wrote a few days ago. Any feedback would be great.

How could You forget the way I tucked Your hair behind Your ear in the morning and called you beautiful?

Don't You recall how I would come home from work and wrap You in my arms so tight? Like you were the only thing keeping me afloat in a sea of exhaustion.

Don't You remember how I ached for You, longed for You, when we were apart. Desperate for Your touch?

No, you don't remember Me. There is no room for Me in a heart so full of itself.

It's no wondered our relationship was always about you. I cared about you. you cared about you.

I opened my eyes to you though. I see you now for what you are and I will NEVER fall for your lies again.

I am beyond your silly games.

So why do these words sound hollow? Why do I feel like I only deceive myself? And Why do I keep asking myself, "Do You Remember Me?"

Reviews

[Sydney]

I absolutely love this. I attribute it to the beautiful use of You vs you. Such a great read.

[Spider Jerusalem]

Man, this poem you made really reflects the love life I'm living in.

[Jay Parker]

No kidding man. I think it's the writers curse or something. A lot of prolific writers from back in the day all seemed to get their hearts ripped out.