Why?

Why?

A Poem by Jay O Gibbs

Why do women call all men dogs?
Is it because you've been hurt too many times
Torn by the same lies
From different other guys
So many tears done ran down your eyes
Your heart is weak from them guys taking your pride
Stepping it on and forcing it back inside
Not caring on how they broken you down
Filled with anger and disgrace
Confused and misplaced
You blame every guy for YOUR mistakes
So you call us men dogs
But how are all men dogs
Becuase if all men are dogs
Then that makes you a w***e
For letting EVERY guy walk through you door
Opening yourself out allowing them to enter
Knowing they don't want your breakfast, lunch or dinner
Only your snack because its quick fast and on the go
But when you meet a real guy
You quite no sure
You want to start something
But you don't want to mess up what you had before
"Friends"
Every good guy is your friend
Every bad guy is your man
Sounds funny to say
But its something every good guy agrees to,
Maybe if you allow yourself to a good guy
And take that risk
You won't be so down on us good guys who you've missed


© 2013 Jay O Gibbs


Author's Note

Jay O Gibbs
Something I just needed to express about.

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Not all women do...i don't or should I say I never have. When all said and done..no woman should be treated badly by any guy and if they were then wouldn't it be their prerogative... only saying.

It's cool that you can be expressive this way in your thoughts and feelings on such delicate subject matters and appreciate the point of view from a females perspective.

Bravo in your quest at wanting to understand... WHY?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Your welcome again... lol
There are good and bad guys and good and bad girls that's just the ways of life. And the name calling goes both ways too though in either case its not good. A girl is not a guys b***h and a guy is not a dog. The world lacks love and respect and too many games are being played. Nicely written poem with an emotive topic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you on your honesty and your right I completely agree on everything you've said.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

You're Welcome.
Oh damn....brutally honest...sometimes we can't help but put a guard up though. When we think a good guy comes along and we give him a chance and it turns out he's not who we think he is, we can't help but build walls....though I agree it's wrong to label all guys as being a******s...but it does suck when a girl tries with someone, gets used, and then is called a w***e, while the guy is awesome for gettin some...seems quite unfair to me, but c'est le vie....and as for the good guys...try some bad boy moves to get us girls, then be the good guy we know you are once you have us ^_~ loved this. It definitely gets ones fingers going xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts. I never thought about being a bad boy but thats what I might just do.
I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sometimes the good girls only get looked at as 'just friends' as well :/
very well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you. And yes your right that is also true.
Truth is: your poem speaks of honesty, it flows well, the words, lines, topic are not just connected, they are in a sequential order that keeps it on track and leads your from the beginning to the conclusion.

As a woman, I see that you have it correct, but not as a blanket encumbrance. Women, well I speak for myself during my short stint dating after divorce. Are treated as property by men....who don't even wanna close the door on the single life. They basically want to eat whatever they want from their fridge. Warm it up if they have to, oh and they think they should have room to live and cuz living....living it up is being single and a player, right?...

It was quite odd, cuz I thought guys in their 30's, would have been matured and ready to find a nice girl, too. But I guess, I was so guarded against these thirsty animals, I may have trapped myself with my own net.

Way too many times I was trapped in with a guy, that I had no idea what had defined us in terms of dating. And trust me, women don't like going on to the next guy. Cuz what does that make the woman when it doesn't work out with these said men with fishing poles looking for women in fishnet stockings?

Anyways, I like your poem so true to modern dating. Keep writing! Well Done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jay O Gibbs

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) And I'm happy that you expressed yourself to me about your personal life. Keep doing yo.. read more

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Jay O Gibbs
Jay O Gibbs

Millsboro, DE



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