Flowers In Rain (No Empathy)

Flowers In Rain (No Empathy)

A Poem by JayJayBlue
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It's about feeling that no matter how hard you try, you just can't open up to people

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In my stomach there's butterflies
I tore their wings so they couldn't fly
I went ahead and pumped my stomach
Full of carbon monoxide

I have no trace of humanity
No sense left for empathy
Maybe there's nothing left to love
Or light left to see

Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me
Kissing you to ease the pain
That just ain't me
All of what you wanted, washed away
Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me

In my heart there's suffering
Devil's in love with an underling
I tried to find the light
But it scorched my skin

I have no joy in my heart
When the world's torn in half
Maybe there's only joy in sleep
And in a brand new start

Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me
Kissing you to ease the pain
That just ain't me
All of what you wanted, washed away
Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me

© 2014 JayJayBlue


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Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me
Kissing you to ease the pain
That just ain't me
All of what you wanted, washed away
Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me

Oh but this would be fine set to music. But keep squeezing the heart; it will turn to mush eventually;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JayJayBlue

10 Years Ago

I've just finished making a song on this one :) I'd perform it, but I can't sing haha
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Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Sing anyway, I say.



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The fourth stanze is bloody brilliant done.100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me
Kissing you to ease the pain
That just ain't me
All of what you wanted, washed away
Bringing you flowers in the rain
That just ain't me

Oh but this would be fine set to music. But keep squeezing the heart; it will turn to mush eventually;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JayJayBlue

10 Years Ago

I've just finished making a song on this one :) I'd perform it, but I can't sing haha
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Sing anyway, I say.
You ain't no flowers kind of guy I take it. ha....a brutally truthful admission.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JayJayBlue

10 Years Ago

I guess I'm not haha doesn't mean I'm completely devoid of being able to feel affection haha

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Added on January 4, 2014
Last Updated on January 4, 2014
Tags: love, distance, apathy, coldness

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JayJayBlue
JayJayBlue

Somewhere in the middle , West Midlands, United Kingdom



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What to say, I'm Jay (as you've guessed haha) I'm a guy who likes to write lyrical-poems, influenced by bands like Manic Street Preachers, Foo Fighters, Smashing Pumpkins, Pearl Jam, Stereophonics.. more..

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