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A Poem by Jason Kelley
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Wordplay via alliteration and rhyme. I was just having fun with words while pointing out a few things I think should be obvious to everyone.

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My amazing ability assures
To everlasting excellence endured
seen other dimensions
whispered to me like confessions
mirroring reflections
negative detections
cultural connections
perceive people on personality
Never notice nationality
make diversity
A Reality

© 2010 Jason Kelley


Author's Note

Jason Kelley
Is it to much alliteration and not enough substance?

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U and ur word play.. lol.. however, great delivery of a msg.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think something like this would go over very well at a spoken word night

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is short and to the point. Diversity can be written to a thousand page book. But you have the answer in the last three lines. We need to rate a man or woman by their deeds in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 25, 2010
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Jason Kelley
Jason Kelley

Baltimore, MD



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I am 29 years old and have been writing off and on for about 12 years. Not so much the past 5 years until very recently and am trying very hard to get back into it. I have very rarely ever shared anyt.. more..

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