Choices

I turned eighty this year, something of a surprise. But I bring good news for those heading in that direction: It's every bit as much fun falling in love at eighty as it was at seventeen.

                        Choices

Morning is when I love you most, I think…
When my eyes first open and thoughts of you bring warmth.
I pull you close…to savor the bed-warm caress of skin-on-skin.
What could improve on that?

But at noon there’s laughter in your eyes that pleases, as we share repast.
Stolen kisses, and hands in glancing touch punctuate conversation.
The taste of mustard and kisses intermingle.
Could I improve on that? 

Afternoon walks with a hand on my arm, your voice caressing.
Incidental affection, shared, brightens the day.
Unexpected adventures, and familiar sights.
Could anything improve on that?

Evening and conversation, storytelling, and kisses.
Precious time, sharing comfort and cuddling.
A day closes. Memory records. Bedtime beckons.
Who could improve on that?

Who would want to?

Reviews

[Eve]

When I read this poem, I felt like I was looking through a couple's life together in flashes. The last sentence, "Who would want to?" ties it together, like the man is looking at his wife for the last time after spending his whole life together and smiling. It paints a beautiful scene. Well done.

[Derekv]

Amazing poem. Beautiful imagery with every scene, it feels as if the audience is looking into chapters of a couple's life together. It almost feels like a story, one that I find myself wanting to know more about.

Keep up the great work!

-Derekv

[Chris Shaw]

Sounds as though you have found your paradise. A very contented and fulfilled poem.

Chris

[Akash gaikwad]

I loved every stanza last line "could improve on that"? Its cute and funny...I could feel your rejoice in this poem..Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

[B Peterson]

Your poem resonated a sense of familiarity. I was able to connect with your words while imagining my love. You spoke of love with simplicity.

"Evening and conversation, storytelling, and kisses.
Precious time, sharing comfort and cuddling.
A day closes. Memory records. Bedtime beckons."

Thank you for the reminder to enjoy the little moments with the person that has captured my heart.

[Onlyme]

Perfection personified. True love, affection and admiration. As each passion day fades. A new chapter begins for the lovers as they age and grow old together.

[marilyn 1225]

a very beautiful union or wedded bliss sweet good writing!!

[Papaya]

I enjoyed your poem JayG.
It was very romantic, capturing real moments.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Love that remains pliable is the greatest gift and who would change that.

[Pete]

playfully affectionate. when it's right, it's right. cute, enjoyable read ...