On Maintaining an Uncongested Throne

On Maintaining an Uncongested Throne

A Poem by JayG
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Help for the modern toilet.

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Three shots to the pot

Before you squat

Is a very strong suggestion.

 

It greases the way

And limits the stay

Of a most unpleasant congestion.

 

But should soaping fail

Don’t reach for the pail

The plunger’s under the sink.

 

A difficult task

It takes a good blast

But it does get rid of the stink.

© 2016 JayG


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Author's Note

JayG
For fun...to show that I'm not a poet, either.

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Pooping is a life saver. So its as important as anything else one does in life, if not more. So why not do it with a flair and elevate pooping to an art? I love this poem because its creative , In Your Face and better than those wishy washy routine love poems I write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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1VJ
Haha funny. Technically speaking, it doesn't stink. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect. You're a poet...because poetry isn't about rhyme or reason or following someone's preset guidelines for archaic perfection. It's about connecting with readers. Drawing a smile or a tear. It's about touching heartstrings, and tickling bellies. It's about pushing the boundaries. Kudos, JayG. Kudos on a poem well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha..lol! This was very funny. You are a poet, every bit! Good, simple rhyme schemes. Yo..you definitely PAINTED the picture, haha!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha......this was good......
you might not be a poet.......this may not be a poem......but this disgusting piece did make me smile........
all i can say is.....it did not stink.....
good job....plunger!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cute write, it does have a flow though. nicely written

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Haha this is simple and perfect. It made me laugh and who doesn't love to laugh? Thank you! I should keep my plunger under the sink come to think of it..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hi JayG I got your name from the top reviewers page and was interested in reading your poetry, I think this one is just a great original and is written in a kind of style that skips on the page with perfect rhymes and easy to read and understand smoothness and I don't agree -- only a very talented poet could do this, I like it a lot because you made me laugh out loud you must have a happy and inventive mind -- thank you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. You certainly have technical skill, but as for emotion...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You are a poet. A horrible one! 😂😂 The plunger's under the sink. Wow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 5 people found this review constructive.

This was quite hilarious for me. If you ever do another poem just for fun, notify me! ha ha. If you ever get a chance could you please check out my book? Thanks!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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