snowflakes

snowflakes

A Poem by Jaweena...Eileen Quintana
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haiku

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cloud droplets frozen
icy crystal clusters fall
snowflakes flutter down


© 2012 Jaweena...Eileen Quintana


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What amazes me most about the snow, is how it falls...without a sound. Wonderful Haiku, Eileen!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful description of a snowflake. A amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is so much sound in these three short lines. I could almost hear a gentle wind. How those snowflakes come and cover the plains in patterns of delicate crystals. This is a beautiful haiku.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snow in DineTaa today. Our world is white here in the land of your Cousins.
Lovely visuals in this perfect haiku.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I miss the snow (an unusually mild winter in the Northeast). So quiet and peaceful as it falls.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haiku does not snore,
or cry because snowballs sting
...it just holds our souls.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So like the days I remember from childhood and the sunshine that reflected from them

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are as beautiful as the happening .. you truly do see with clear eyes. Plus, there's that gentle difference between 'fall' and 'flutter'.

A wonderful haiku. (You)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 18, 2012
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Jaweena...Eileen Quintana
Jaweena...Eileen Quintana

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"Ya'at'eeh" means hello in the Navajo language. My name is Eileen Quintana....Jaweena was a name that my brother called me when I was a baby. I am learning how to write about my unique perspective.. more..

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