Hey Everyone, Look at the Guy on the Ledge

Frustration, Fear and Anger

         Hey Everyone, Look at the Guy on the Ledge

I’m hanging on the edge

Holding tight as I can

Fingers begin to break

Don’t know how much more they’ll take 

Below me the abyss

Can’t take much more of this

Oblivion awaits

As my hands begin break

-Jaspar

Reviews

[Cara]

I like how it could reflect self. it could have many meaning to it and it could be very touching. I would also like to say i love the way its short. I think shorter things to read are better for the reader. that is why i keep my story chapters short.

[Jaspar]

Thank you for your kind feedback.