The Fall

Lost love

          The Fall

Hopes so high they were sure to fall

A broken heart now on the floor

Promises that don’t mean s**t

Words and sentences form to fit

Manifest to their effect

intentions sought to inflict

What felt so real now I know

All an act just a show

Do they ever stop to think

The pain that’s caused

Prey on the weak

Living with this heavy heart

Tears fall like rain please make it stop

Please let me learn to live again

Or at least fake it I’ll pretend

That I’m ok to comfort them

God I miss you Colleen

-Jaspar

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Very sylabetic and free flowing, emotionally driven. A very nice price, great work.

[Jaspar]

You just made my day! Thank you so much for the kind feedback. I'll be sure to read your story when I have time. Thanks again.