D-pressed

Sitting beside my window
Thinking about the good times
Thinking long and hard but can't seem to remember any
What did i do to deserve this?
What did i do to be so sad?
I swear i haven't been bad
I hope you come and see me
And make sure that you free me
I'll try not to cry
I know its all a big lie
This life of mine sucks
Please kill me for a thousand bucks!

Reviews

[EvilAngel]

u made it funny at the end.i like that.it's simple.i like that too.and you said what u wanted to.its a gr8 poem

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

This is how a lot of people are feeling these days. This was a good way of expressing emotions. I liked it. Good job. Good writings to you!
-Yin