An Offer

You Cannot Resist.

"I See A Little Grasshopper Jumping By Me. 

 I Can't Resist To Pick Him Up. 

 Looking Closely I See A Leg Broken. 

 Feeling Sad About It I Take Him Home. 

 Looking Into Lifes Gifts With Appreciation. 

 I'm Simply Grateful To Say With Confidence. 

 That I'm Glad With Another Life Is In Motion. 

 And I've Helped To See It Live Again To Breathe.

 Swift Air Softens My Soul As It's To Your Heart.

 Looking Back At The Bad I've Done I Can Finally Say. 

 I May Not Be Able To Replace Them But I Can Try To. 

                           'Fix Them With You'

 Countless Tears Crys You A River Of Doubt And For That. 

 All I"m Asking Is Relief Of Ignorance And Selfishness. 

 In The Very End If I See You Again I Can Shout. 

 I Love You With A Hopeful Smile As It Fades Again. 

 But My Offer Is Immortality Above With The Stars.

 Where All Can See You Shine Bright And Forever.

 With Me Beside You There Is Nothing You Cannot.

 Accomplish By Any Measures As You Become Precious. 

                                   'To Me" 

Reviews

[rivers]

Staying in motion one step at a time is the key to required motion, inertia... the ability of motion to stay in motion...This is key grasshopper to living life. Yes you can fix them as the answers are from within the soul...Crying a river?...the river she crys with you not at you. We all have regrets, saving a life when it is within your power is noble. Love is the path and the way to living a wholehearted life...

[None]

I love the beginning with the grasshopper, but I fail to see his subsequent weaving into the poem, as the voice seems to be speaking to someone else. Nonetheless, the message and the meaning are well portrayed. Good work.