You

Focus Yet.

"Willing To See What's Inside. 

 Banish This Feeling To Hide. 

 Simple Closure With Promise. 

 Just Look Into Me And Focus. 

 Hollow Thoughts Run The Moment. 

 But It's My One Wing You Hold Onto. 

 Of What Half I Was Now Torn Apart.

 I Dipped The Other Wing In Hell. 

 To Save You From Damnation. 

 But For That Sacrifice I've Undone. 

 The Promise I've Made To Him.

 For What To See Someone Be Wronged.  

                    'Again' 

 I Still See The Cold From Your Breath. 

 It Makes Me Smile Yet So Fully. 

 Cause It's Life That's So Precious. 

 It Was You That Breathed Hope.

  

                   'Into Me'

 And For It I've Seen The Good Within You. 

 I've Stood Up For You When No One Else Would."

Reviews

[ChaoticSoul]

You've captured the vulnerability of human nature beautifully in this poem. It emotes a sense of optimism, yet shows a kind of darkness as well. Very nicely done.

[Sleeping Maiden]

OMG... you've done it again!!! Beautiful poetry... with that sadness you greatly write in. this is stunning and i love the imagery and emotions..

It's so sad but yet has power in this. I love it so much!!

[Sheila Kline]

It is always good to know there is one who will go the extra mile, be there when the going gets the most difficult, and you have expressed this conviction in a positive way!

[S Sanders]

Yeah, you outdid yourself on this one. I wouldn't alter it in any way. I think I will add it to my library if you don't mind.

[Deandra Dawn]

I love it...absolutely amazing. I wouldn't change a thing

[Roe]

I'm speechless! This write is amazing