Lord Of Shadows

Forgotten Once More.

"Do You Remember All Those Times?

        You Cried In Your Room.

 Do You Remember All Those Lines?

        You Said In Your Heart.

 Every Tear You Cry Falls.

 Down Into My Hand As Rain.

 Grasping It With Pain.

 Every Time You Give Up.

 Yet You Say Its All Over.

 Yet I Hear You Can't.

 But Still Within You Shake.

 But Your Mind Can Forsake.

 I Can Feel You Internal.

 And I Can Still Feel You Below. 

 I Can Feel You Forever.

 And I Can Still Feel You Above.

 How Much Does It Take?

 How Much Do I Really Need?

 To Prove That You Are Precious.

 To Remove Endless Grief Inside.

 Here I Can See You Smile.

 When You Are Happy.

 Here I Can See You Cry.

 When You Are Alone Again.

 But Its Your Tear That I Keep Eternal. 

 Here Within Me And Yet I Still Cry With You.

 You Are Not Alone Cause I Am You Forever.

 Look Down And See Me As Your Lord Of Shadows.

 Its Your Tear The Drives Me To See You Smile.

 Once More Its The Fear You Control That We Fight.

 Together And Always Until The End We Are Much More.

 Its Your Tear That I Look Through That Makes Me Smile - Once More."

 

Reviews

[Jack Reaper]

dark and beautiful. this is quite simply amazing.

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

to feel this connectedness between two, it's truly an amazing gift.
Even in the shadows, the one who know longer is... will always be
Sadly written, Heart felt and takes this reader to a depth where understanding is felt within her core....

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow. This is amazing. I love the passion in this even though it's so sad. I can relate to this writing! I love the emotions in this. Wonderful work!!
=D

[Cathy Wattam]

I like this. It is sad, yes but it has a good flow. Keep it up!

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Sad and beautiful, that's all I can say...

[Cherrie Palmer]

This is true beauty, the flow is sad and steady for this melancholy tale.

[Tori]

Very sad, yet the composition and flow is remarkble. A sad story with a beautiful execution, bravo.

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a remarkable poem you have here. It is well conceived and harvests interesting clips of thought.

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting poem. I get it. To someone you are committed even if it is in the shadows.