Approve The Proven

Approve The Proven

A Poem by Jason Shadows
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Accept The Right.

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"For Every Second You Don't Lie.
 You Can Walk With Me And See Me Die.
 Break Down Into The Never Ending Tears.
 Take My Hand Feel Me Running Away With Fears.

 Time Is Now My Ultimate Enemy. 
 But Time Has Been My Ultimate Friend.
 I Forgotten The Ones Who Really Cared.
 The Care Just Faded Away In The Fantasy.

 I Still Wish To Be Unreal.
 But Still I Live In The Real.
 This World I Breathe In.
 Has A Hold On My Last Sin.
 
 I Can't Seem To Grab Hold Of Reality.
 But I Still Turn From The Truth.
 I Can't Seem To Remember Why I Came.
 But Under All Of This I'm Still Removed.

 In Their Words I Can't Tell Whats Real.
 But I'm Hinder For What I Can Really Feel.
 I've Broken My Dreams But I Still Try To Reach My Reason.
 I Came Alone From Within But Now I Can Approve The Proven."

© 2011 Jason Shadows


Author's Note

Jason Shadows
Approve The Proven Means To Accept The Right.
To Finally Agree With Someone Who Is Right.

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Jason,

We are only as right as our last wrong... and the sinister left - behind, near, grounded, alone - is always within.

This one line within stanza 2 is troublesome:

"I Forgotten The Ones Who Really Cared."

Chris



Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2011
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Jason Shadows
Jason Shadows

I'm your shadow within the light., NC



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