Shadow Flame

The Lord Of The Broken.

"Piece By Piece I Can Feel My Soul Peel.

 Crying Away The Pain Into This Lonely Seal.

 Cursed To Look Away From Your Heart.

 I Stepped Into Your Hourglass Torn Apart.

 My Fingers Hold The Answer To It All.

 Just Whisper Into My Desolated Hall.

 Witness The Souls Of The Forlorn.

 Hear The Loud Sound Of My End That's Torn.

 But Even If You Take It All.

 I Will Still Be Lonely.

 For If You Give It Back.

 I Can Finally Walk Away.

 Head Down With A Smile.

 I Know You Broke My Will.

 To Let It Go From Within.

 With No Fate But What We Make.

 I Still Cry And No One Hears.

 I'm Still Staring Into The Lost.

 I Can Hear Them Calling Out.

 For Someone Anyone To Let Them Go.

 They Are Mine Forever.

 And You're Next To Walk In.

 Into My Forgotten World.

 Where Love Still Lingers.

 My Heart Is Your Despair.

 My Soul Is Your Hope.

 My Eyes Are Your Beginning.

 My Words Are Your End.

 But I'm Still The Master Of The Forsaken.

 And Here I'm The Lord Of Desolation.

 In My Heart I See You Swim Within Love's Pain.

 In My Soul I Can Feel You In Love With My Shadow Flame."

 

 

Reviews

[S Sanders]

..."But even if you take it all, I will still be lonely; for if you give it back, I can finally walk away." I like that line. One typo/grammar thingy I see--that I've been known to overlook before, too--is stanza 6 line 2 "your next to walk in" should probably be "you're" Til next time, I enjoyed the read.