Pain

Pain

A Poem by Jason Shadows
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Within.

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"Finally I Can See Your Precious Soul.

 Within This Beautiful Glass Rose.

 Slick And Smooth Like Your Heart.

 Falling In The Wind Like Your Mind.

 

 But Have You Ever Had To Remove A Scar On Your Soul?

 But Within A World Long Forgotten Have You Really Survived?

 

 Forsaken By Love And Let It Fade.

 Draw Me In The Moon Light As A Shade.

 Just Dance With Me In My Shadowy Rain.

 But Hold On Tight As We Lock Away This Pain." 

© 2011 Jason Shadows


Author's Note

Jason Shadows
Please Note Give Me Some Time To Return To Finish This One. Thanks

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The last line is just... amazing. The whole piece is beautiful, as I often find your work, but that last line is already stuck in my mind. Beautiful :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


You shall remain pain free, in my arms, in my heart, and most importantly, in my soul. I love you.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2011
Last Updated on August 19, 2011

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Jason Shadows
Jason Shadows

I'm your shadow within the light., NC



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