My Soul

Deep Beyond.

"I'm Just Like The Moon In Your Heart.

 I Just Keep Shining Bright To See You Smile.

 But I Forgazed To Far Into Your Love.

 Just To Be Lost Again In My Lake.

 

 Standing Alone Inside Your Soul.

 I Make A Promise Forever.

 To Make You Happy With A Glow.

 To See Your Life Crawl So Slow.

 

 Its That First Step Into Me.

 That Takes You Further.

 Right Into A Precious Moment.

 Of Peace And Hope.

 

 I'm The Passion You Desire.

 For It's The Grabbing Fire.

 That Reaches And Touches You.

 In My Future I Need You To.

 

 Tyrants Bleed The Air.

 Just To Show That I Am A Man.

 Taking Away My Freedom.

 Slaved In Factories Of Living Machines.

 

 No Fear No Emotions.

 They Hunt For Laughter.

 Here I Cannot Breathe.

 Here I Cannot Live.

 

 But In This Time.

 I Am Your Salvation.

 I'm Within You In A Beat.

 Its Your Heart That Keeps Me Alive.

 

 To Live And Fight.

 To See Another Day.

 But Darkness Is Divine Here.

 I'm Just Your Shadow Reaching For The Light.

 

 Its My Tears That Make You Shine.

 Your Beautiful Memories Are In My Mind.

 I Can't Forget You Cause You're Never Alone.

 I Can't Let Go Of Your Soul Cause Its In My Eyes.

 

 Darkness Surrounds My Heart.

 But The Light Within Gleams Out.

 Only You Can Pass Through.

 Just Take A Step Into My Soul."

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

glorious!

[Brianna Brie]

I like how first he is in her soul and at the end he offers his soul to her. It feels passionately intense. Love it.

[Marilu Elizabeth]

so far it is a very beutiful poem..im very excited to read the rest :D

[S Sanders]

Makes me anxious to see the rest. Line four could even read: Just take a step "inside" my soul, ey? Just a teeny weeny thought/suggestion. You can take it or toss it;-) I like how you bring us in with your words, though. Some poems you just read, but yours have a lingering effect. Kudos.

[Sukriti Suki]

I really like this...I will read it again once you are finished but in these 4 lines you say a lot.

[Cherrie]

now that’s a cool drink of sparkling water