Cold Fire

Frozen Within.

"Will The Past Help Me?

 Will It Even Care?

 Will It Help To Remember?

 Will It Leave The Pain Behind?

 

 How Can The Furture Help You?

 How Can It Bring Such Peace?

 How Can You See Beyond Into Nothing?

 How Can It Come To Be If It Doesn't Last?

 

 Time Walks Forever Smiling Back.

 Peace Forever Fighting To Survive.

 Chaos Always Bring It To The Table.

 The Dark Will Always Rise To Be Heard.

 

 Please Light My Way.

 Please Show Me The Way.

 Please Lend Me A Hand.

 Please Just Hold Me One Last Time.

 

 You Said You Would Promise Me.

 That You Would Always Love Me.

 Now You Feel So Cold And Dead.

 Is It Really My Fault That I Lost You?

 

 Here I Stand In The Puddle Of Frozen Love Waiting.

 I Need For You To Reach Through And Pull Me Alive.

 Here I'm Lost Within But Still Held By Your Precious Soul. 

 It Was Your Heart That Walked Through My Candle Of Cold Fire."

 

 

 

Reviews

[S Sanders]

The questions in the first and second stanzas set the stage, but my favorite line is, "Time walks forever smiling back." Take a look at the second stanza, first line, though. It should be future instead of furture. Other than that, simply beautiful. Love it!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Very nice Jason.. This held me captive till the end, left me longing for just a little more. I love the last stanza, I love the emotions that run through the loss of the one you love. Not quite ready to give up, something we can all at one time or another relate too. Brillant write.xx

[Cherrie]

..I Need For You To Reach Through And Pull Me Alive. Here I'm Lost Within..
I wish I would have thought of that (here I'm lost within) wow loved that line

[Lily Mae]

"It Was Your Heart That Walked Through My Candle Of Cold Fire." I love it as a whole but this last line nailed it for me.. and awesome write..xx