Deadly Melody

Your Secret Fantasy.

"Prize This Moment.

 Hinder Your Tyrant.

 Thats Become Ancient.

 Show Him That You're Still Extant.

 So Lick The Wall Of Poison.

 Give A Kiss To A Thorn Of Treason.

 As This Lost Feeling Becomes An Omen.

 Bleach Out What You Used To Call A Reason.

 Just Call Me Your Candyman.

 But You See Me Walk Away As A Deadman.

 More Like From Outer Space Like A Spaceman.

 At Night As You Go To Sleep You Can Call Me Your Sandman.

 I'm So Sweet To You In The Sun Rise.

 But In The Night I Become Your Elusive Disguise.

 In This Flashing Light That Becomes To Be My Surprise.

 You Order Me To Stop The World As It Cries.

 My Thoughts Become Your Enticing Mirage.

 Drift Away Into This Apparent Montage.

 Behold A New Insight To A Corrosive Image.

 As It Holds A Beautiful Key To Your Hearts Message.

 Do You Ever Think How You Can Escape With Me To Be Saved?

 Did You Ever Write Down How Far You Get While Being Enslaved?

 Did You Ever Write Down How Far You Got With Your Outrage?

 Do You Ever Think How Far You Can Get Without Me In This Cage?

 

 You Know I Have The Half Of Your Love - In This Lamp As Your Genie.

 You Know You Can't Breath - As My Soul Has Become So Dusty.

 You Have Me - Entrapped Me As The Phantom Of Misery.  

 You Have Let Loose - My Secret Of Your Hearts Deadly Melody."

 

  

 

Reviews

[morningstar]

wow this was awesome. i love how you rhymed in here too and how it's really dark. cool poem

[Shardbearer99]

That was really an incredibly dark piece of poetry. I really like that whole menacing atsmosphere that you've created. My favourite line is: "I'm So Sweet To You In The Sun Rise. But In The Night I Become Your Elusive Disguise." This is great wording. Thanks for sharing and it was a pleasure to read. You have a great writing style, too.