Portrait Of Ruin

Of Immortal Love.

"An Eternal Image Of A Twisted Reflection.

 Look Back Into Your Haunting Section.

 It Brings A New Word For A Crazy Reason.

 Pick Up The Paint Brush Thats Full Of Poison.

 She Is Precious.

 Isn't She?

 She Is Breathtaking.

 Isn't She?

 As Your Soul Begins To Rot.

 It Was Love That You Forgot.

 For Everything You Fought For.

 Becomes A Missing Door Of Lore.

 Memories Chained To Your Fallen Life.

 It's The Confusing Moments Of Strife.

 Crawling In Your Head As Flashbacks.

 It's Like The Ink Your Heart Pumps Black.

 She Is In Here.

 Isn't She?

 She Lives Forever.

 Doesn't She?

 Bring Her Back From This Dream World.

 Your Abandoned World Thats Twirled.

 This Is The Way To Show That You Care.

 Bring A Lost Heart That Will Glow So Rare. 

 

 Will You Hear Her Cries?

 Fallen Down Again And Again She Tries.

 Will You Let Her Become Free?

 Look At Her Don't You See?

 Longing For You To Let Her Go.

 She Has Lost Everything She Has Known. 

 So Draw Her A Stair Case Home.

 For In Your Darkness She Is All Alone.

 This Time You Can Feel That True Power.

 As Light Brings Her A Rain Shower.

 Love This Holy Creation You Made.

 And Tell Her You Are Not Afraid.

 

 Look In Her Eyes And Tell Her She Is Your Hope.

 Bring A New Light About As You Hold Her On This Slope. 

 Let Out The Dark Within Her Now That You Have Her Heart.

 So Throw Away This Perfect Portrait Of Ruin Thats Torn You Both Apart."

 

 

 

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

beautiful awesome and dark :D love it

[Blindfolded]

You did a good job with the combination of words and the imagery. The writing is dark but flows well.

[Jordan]

Oh, what a lovely poem! This has used beautiful imagery and wording that is simplistic but also touching. It feels like you are screaming in the beginning and it goes to a whisper, with a tear in your eye and in your throat there is a scratch.. Again, a lovely poem!! :)

[Shardbearer99]

They way in which you can pull these words together is wonderful. I love how your writing style is just so dark and sinister, but it flows really well too. "An Eternal Image Of A Twisted Reflection" You have a great way of drawing a reader's attention to your poems. These are great and I can't wait to check out your other works.