Heartless

From The Heart.

"The Chemistry Of The Soul.

 Its So Eerie Of Being Whole.

 Angels Carrying Away My Heart.

 Demons Crying On My Soul To Make New Art.

 Trying So Hard Is Never Easy.

 Life Can Be So Beastly.

 But You Don't See It So Beautifully.

 You Just Wash It Away As It Becomes Bloody.

 You Miss Me So Much.

 Wounder Into My Precious Touch.

 You Seem So Hard To Handle.

 But You're Always In My Heart As An Angel.

 When We Meet You Seem So Lonely.

 You Tell Me How Life Seems So Blurry.

 Just Sitting There You Venture Into Another Fantasy.

 You Ask Me If You Sound Crazy.

 Further Into Your Minds Decree.

 You Try To Manage What Is Truly.

 Listening To My Words You Can See My Aurora. 

 The Love In My Heart Shoots Like The Rays Of Plasma.

 Reach Out And See Whats Inside.

 You Know I Have Nothing To Hide.

 Here You Can Hear How My Soul Cried.

 As It Tried To Escape The Dark Side.

 

 You Often Try To Remember.

 Our Past Life As It Burned Into Cinder.

 Standing In The Rain - I Can See The Fire As It Is Forgotten.

 Falling In Ruins As It Becomes The Ultimate Weapon.

 That Choice To Choose Has Drowned In Fire.

 My Forbidden Right To See My Undying Desire.

 The Ring That I Fought For Is Blacken.

 Smothered In Ash - I Just Can't Believe This Happened.

 The Void Of Selfishness.

 The Electric Thunder In My Eyes Becomes Fearless.

 The Butterflies That Help Me Up Become Wingless.

 As The Gears That Turn Them Fade From Being So Breathless.

 Once Free And Now Chained To Apathy.

 Your Mind Becomes Partly Cloudy.

 Ask Me To Remove The Silence As It Becomes My Trophy.

 But In The End You Can Hear My Wings Closely.

 The Blacktop Of Terror.

 Becomes Your Armors Shredder.

 Now That You're Open.

 You Have Become Beaten.

 Crying For Someone To Save You From Being Soulless.

 Just Meltdown Into My Tears Of Sadness.

 Let Your Fears Form My Lake Of Darkness.

 As I Get The Oppression Of Making You So Heartless."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

Reviews

[Cherrie]

dark but peaceful you weave words in a masterful way

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

nice twisted flow

[Dani]

Your piece flowed so well!! Great word choice! Stunning!

[Jess.]

Wow, this is amazing. It has me speechless almost. Beautifully written.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

the electric thunder in my eyes become fearless. Such incredibly imagery in this wonderful piece.

[AchingAlexandra]

Mmm, darkness wound into the perfect form of poetry. It has the wonderful flow of a beautiful poem, and the dark yet heartfelt subject I just adore reading. All in all, amazing poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many great stanzas in this poem. It is a dark tale of love and a bit twisted but the love is shown clearly. No love in this world is without its troubles.