Heartless

From The Heart.

"The Chemistry Of The Soul.

 Its So Eerie Of Being Whole.

 Angels Carrying Away My Heart.

 Demons Crying On My Soul To Make New Art.

 Trying So Hard Is Never Easy.

 Life Can Be So Beastly.

 But You Don't See It So Beautifully.

 You Just Wash It Away As It Becomes Bloody.

 You Miss Me So Much.

 Wounder Into My Precious Touch.

 You Seem So Hard To Handle.

 But You're Always In My Heart As An Angel.

 When We Meet You Seem So Lonely.

 You Tell Me How Life Seems So Blurry.

 Just Sitting There You Venture Into Another Fantasy.

 You Ask Me If You Sound Crazy.

 Further Into Your Minds Decree.

 You Try To Manage What Is Truly.

 Listening To My Words You Can See My Aurora. 

 The Love In My Heart Shoots Like The Rays Of Plasma.

 Reach Out And See Whats Inside.

 You Know I Have Nothing To Hide.

 Here You Can Hear How My Soul Cried.

 As It Tried To Escape The Dark Side.

 

 You Often Try To Remember.

 Our Past Life As It Burned Into Cinder.

 Standing In The Rain - I Can See The Fire As It Is Forgotten.

 Falling In Ruins As It Becomes The Ultimate Weapon.

 That Choice To Choose Has Drowned In Fire.

 My Forbidden Right To See My Undying Desire.

 The Ring That I Fought For Is Blacken.

 Smothered In Ash - I Just Can't Believe This Happened.

 The Void Of Selfishness.

 The Electric Thunder In My Eyes Becomes Fearless.

 The Butterflies That Help Me Up Become Wingless.

 As The Gears That Turn Them Fade From Being So Breathless.

 Once Free And Now Chained To Apathy.

 Your Mind Becomes Partly Cloudy.

 Ask Me To Remove The Silence As It Becomes My Trophy.

 But In The End You Can Hear My Wings Closely.

 The Blacktop Of Terror.

 Becomes Your Armors Shredder.

 Now That You're Open.

 You Have Become Beaten.

 Crying For Someone To Save You From Being Soulless.

 Just Meltdown Into My Tears Of Sadness.

 Let Your Fears Form My Lake Of Darkness.

 As I Get The Oppression Of Making You So Heartless."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, reading this takes my breath away!!! So moving, heartfelt and simply so full of grief... the sadness in this is amazing..
You describe this perfectly! I am in love with your work! It makes me look forward to reading more. =) such deepness in your words.. touches my soul. ^^ Well-written! I love how you express yourself. Well done!

[Sunni Davis]

Very deep emotions here and you've expressed them greatly.

[frozensakura]

i love the diction you used in creating this... great poem
~Frozensakura

[Hayley]

Very moving.
I especially like
"That Choice To Choose Has Drowned In Fire.
My Forbidden Right To See My Undying Desire.
The Ring That I Fought For Is Blacken.
Smothered In Ash - I Just Can't Believe This Happened."

Dark, sad, yet peaceful. I like your rhyme scheme here and how none of them seem forced. Very nice write

[brenda]

i wish i was heartless love the poem:)

[emona]

wow thats deep

[Millie]

This absolutely amazing! It's one I am sure to read over and over. I love emotion expressed and the depth of the emotion. I love it

[Dilan Gray]

This is so amazingly beautiful! I love it! The flow is so great and I love the emotions! I love this poem!

[Fayla Z. Valentine]

One word. Beautiful.
That's all I can say about this.

[:)]

wow this is really good and really dark and really sad. Lot's of really's eh?

Your word choice and the flow are nicely put together with such a sadistic tone and a hint of remorse.
Beautiful.