Waiting

For The Return Of Love.

"Listen To The Rain.

 Just Let It Fall.

 To The Ground.

 Never To Touch You.

 But It Walks Around.

 No Noise No Whispers.

 Just Silent And Passive.

 Remaining To Be Thoughtless.

 

 In Time It Will.

 Sing To You.

 Just Stand There.

 And Remember A Time Forgotten.

 Here And Now You Seem.

 So Beautiful And Breathtaking.

 But With No Words.

 To Hear And Say.

 I Float In Midair.

 Waiting For A Sign.

 When Will You Return.

 To Me And Me Only.

 So Lost And So Lonely.

 Frozen In Time.

 Never To Move.

 As The World Keeps Moving.

 Slowly And With A Desire.

 I Hold You So Close.

 In The Crying Rain.

 Just To Imprint The Love.

 Will You Ever Move?

 Will You Ever Come Back?

 Just Will You Blink For Me?

 Please Just Show Me A Sign.

 I Miss You So.

 I Need You In My Mind.

 I Need You Here With Me.

 But I Need You More In My Heart.

 So Much Love Lost.

 Just Fading Away.

 Without You.

 Around To Give.

 But I Will Not Give Up.

 I Will Help You.

 Fight The Darkness.

 Inside.

 Fighting For So Long.

 I Am Your Light.

 That Shines The Way.

 To Me.

 Just Come Back Home.

 I Can't Seem To Stop Crying.

 In This Warm Rain.

 But Can It Sooth Your Soul?

 I Am The Angel You Asked For.

 I Am The Love You Wanted And Needed.

 Its Just So Lonely In My Heart.

 I'm So Sad Cause I Leave You.

 Everyday I Walk Away.

 But You Still Remain Still.

 But I Look Back Hoping.

 You Will Say I Love You.

 But I'm Not Giving Up On You.

 You Are Apart Of Me To.

 For Your Heart Just Keeps On Beating.

 I Can Hear It For I Will Always Be Waiting."

 

 

Reviews

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

"I Will Help You.
Fight The Darkness.
Inside"

- if it was only that simple, sometimes one must face the "darkness" alone.
some come in "light" but leave one "darker then when the first came.

[Colie]

Wow! I am speechless. I could feel all these emotions flooding me while I read this. It is amazing. You are a great writer. You know how to portray multiple feelings all at once. You know how to go directly to the readers heart.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

You weave emotions of sadness and hope here, and your word choice breathes life into the situation. This is beautiful and an emotional struggle. Determination beckons to be realized and it's fantastic! Great work!

[K. N. Graf]

I love the emotion. I could literally feel pain in my heart while I read this. You are a great writer. Keep writing.

[A.E. Surdam]

My heart breaks as I read. So beautiful and yet so romantically sad.

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem. It is so beautifully written and I love the back and forth of sadness and hope that things will change. This was so great! A really beautiful poem!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

this was beautiful and sad ......love is a tragedy

my fave lines were "Slowly And With A Desire I Hold You So Close In The Crying Rain Just To Imprint The Love"

and thanks you just gave me an idea for a new poem Ill send u a read request when its done and posted

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem but it is sad. The flow is really smooth. this poem reminds me of someone who has depression and had become a selective mute or of someone in a coma. the lover is waiting for them to return to their normal state for they don't not want to go through life without the one they love.

[Ladysue]

such a warm tone to this piece...great progression and good phrasing and imagery...just beautifully done...