Never Ending

Frozen Heart.

"Bring Back My Broken Heart.

 That You Stole In The First Place.

 You Said You Would Not Hurt Me.

 But You Broken Your Shallow Promise.

 You Said You Wouldn't Let Go.

 But You Faded Away So Peaceful.

 Like A River Just Floating Onwards.

 Speeding Away Like A Rocket.

 You Took My Breath Into A New Atmosphere.

 Here I Still Stood Just Standing My Ground.

 Stuck Into The Earth Like A Railroad Spike.

 As The Silent Rain So Cold Washed My Hopes.

 All I Need Is You To Return My Dreams.

 Just Return What Which Was Never Yours. 

 My Soul Is So Empty And Never Smiling.

 Just So Lonely And Passing In Time.

 Break Away The Words You Said.

 Just Run Away With Your Fears.

 One Day You Will Return With A Sad Face.

 Forgiving In My Eyes That Shine A New Beginning.

 Here In This Spiral Word.

 Reminds Us Of A Scar Engraved.

 Waded And Twisted In Meaning.

 Frosted And Dreaded Within.

 My Soul Is Crying.

 My Heart Is So Cold Waiting.

 My Deserted Mind Is A Storm Warning.

 You're My Forsaken Love Thats Never Ending."  

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

Very good get the point across, and you do express cold well...
Good job...

You get the impression of cold across very well, enhancing it with images of rain and tears. Even the railroad spike added to it with the feel of cold metal, a person frozen in place. Well done.

[Jean]

I looove this. [With extra o's for emphasis] :) Love love love love!
It has been favorited. :)

I don't really have anything constructive to say other than that.