Precious

Just To Remember Them.

"Gone?

 Are You Really Gone?

 How Can You Leave Me?

 There Was So Much To Talk About.

 (The Tears Keep Rolling)

 Yes I Do Remember.

 I Remember The Days.

 We Had Together.

 The Days We Laughed And Cried.

 (The Memories Still Remain)

 I Looked Up To You.

 I Wanted For You To Live.

 Forever.

 But Now Your Gone.

 (In My Heart I Still Feel You)

 My Eyes Can't Even Open.

 They Are So Heavy.

 So Many Thoughts.

 To Much Pain To Bare.

 (When Will I See You Again?)

 I Miss You.

 I Need You Here.

 Don't Go Please Don't Go.

 I Will Change Everything.

 (I Promise With All My Might)

 But I Know I Can't Save You.

 But I Will Always Have You In My Heart.

 But As Along As I Have You There Your Never Really Gone.

 But I Know Now That Life Is So Wonderful With You.

 (I Will Never Forget You)

 

 I Just Can't Let You Go Cause.

 You Are So Precious."

 

 

Author's Note

This One Is For My Dad Who Died In My Arms. 11/9/2010

Reviews

[sushi]

really sorry for your loss. your love for your dad is reflected with depth

[Sarah Jane]

I'm really sorry for your loss, but this is a beautiful poem I love how the words in parenthasis make their own poem by themselves. This is touching:)

[Moonflower]

This was a truly heart wrenching piece, A very emotional piece. My condolences for your loss, dear.~~

Peace~

Desiree

[EmpressPoetess]

Truly heartbreaking. Deeply emotional, stark and bold. So sorry for your loss. Hang in there, because the bible holds a hope that you'll see him again!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a brilliant write and you have pour your heart into this piece. This is a nice tribute to your dad.

[Isis]

Im so sorry to hear about your dad.
Its a beautiful poem..

[.]

A lump in the throat..even before your authors note...simply stunning..he would be so proud of you :)

[Workingonit!!]

Oh so much pain releasing in such a touching lyrical writing.. I too know this pain.. lost my dad a couple of weeks before 9/11 and 3 grandparents in a 2 year time period at the same time. Everyone close to me that encouraged and understood me were taken.. left with only sweet memories. I sure hope time heals such losses.. and your writing moved me so intensely.. beautiful work.

[Geralyn Miller]

My heart knows your pain; I lost my beloved Mother in 2001, I remember being so filled with sorrow, I could not cry. The only comfort I can give you is the kowledge that, over time, the pain will lessen and the wonderful memories will be foremost. They were wonderful parents and raised us well, so we will continue living to the best of our abilities.