Candle Of Ice

Love Lost.

"Fire Of White Blue.

 Burning Each Passing Night.

 Flickers In The Bleeding Daylight. 

 Rain Drowns It To Anew.

 You Hold The Candle.

 As Your Hands Become Frozen.

 I Place My Hands Over Yours On The Handle.

 But Now You Can Feel My Heart Broken.

 Igniting The Fire On It.

 Move Your Hands Through The Fire.

 Draining Your Life Force Like A Vampire.

 But You Can't Withstand It As It Becomes Your Ultimate Desire.

 Flying In Your Eyes.

 As They Turn Whitish Blue.

 But No One Can Love You Like I Do.

 For I'm Bound By My Own Lies.

 You Are Immortal In Timeless.

 My Own Soul Is Priceless.

 Forsaken As Sadness.

 Your Are My Weakness.

 Just To Have You Precise.

 I Had My Wings Broken For A Price.

 Please Do Not Make The Same Mistake Twice.

 For Your Heart Is Frozen Forever If You Hold My Candle Of Ice."

 

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this reminds me of a beautiful fairy tale (with some what of a dark but romantic twist) i really like this! great job!

[megalOmaniac]

i feel your pain..beautifully written..

[Paddy]

outstanding work, love the flow of emotions going on. Very gentle and smooth yet so true

[Poetry Girl]

this is a really great poem. it is deep and makes me feel the emotions just from reading the words. i liked it a lot. it flows perfectly. i cant see one that that need to be changed. wonderful job!