Forgotten

Just Hold On And Don't Let Go.

"Go Back And Remember.

 To A Time When We Where In Love.

 Holding Each Other Was So Peaceful. 

 Given A Kiss Was So Breathtaking.

 The Air That Blew Through Your Hair.

 The Sun Was So Bright That Day.

 The Moment We Wanted Was There.

 The Words I Wanted To Say Disappeared.

 

 Just One Look Thats All It Took.

 I Got So Lost In Your Eyes.

 My Words Scattered When Nervous.

 You Had My Heart In Your Hands.

 I Was Walking Into Your Gateway.

 Your Eyes Revealed Your Beautiful Soul.

 Something No One Can Forget.

 I Run To Grab A Hold Of You.

 You Keep Floating Backwards.

 You Keep Slipping Away.

 I Keep Reaching For You.

 But I Cannot Touch You.

 

 In A Universe So Lonely.

 It Hurts To Know That.

 You Whispered To Me.

 Hang On I Will See You Soon.

 Blinking My Eyes.

 The Light Flashed Bringing Me Back.

 You Where Standing There In My Arms.

 Then I Saw A Shinny Tear.

 Why Do You Cry I Ask?

 You Say To Me.

 You Are A Ghost.

 As I Touch You One Last Time. 

 Falling And Failed To Realize.

 I Broke Your Heart. 

 Torn Your Soul Into.

 And Left You All Alone.

 

 But Most Of All.

 I Have Lost You And I Have Forgotten Myself."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

Reviews

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

Captivating, tells of truth of love and lose within...
Great write

[The Exception]

Beautiful. Its like from a dream and I really enjoy the ending.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this gave me chills, this poem itself is heartbreaking! what was your inspiration for this one? its amazing.

[deeps]

Whoa! Now this is a write. I like this alot from the flow to the message.
This is a very well written write. Enjoyable read.

[Alicia™]

A beautiful poem and very poetic. I like the words and the flow, but I have a few problems with this. First off, not every word in a poem has to be capitalized. Only the first word in a line. And another is that you shouldn't put a period after every line. Just where it's necessary.

But other than the technical problems, I like this poem!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Awesome Bro...