Immortal Djinn

Being Immortal Can Be Forever.

"I Once Held You In My Tears.

 You Cannot Go On With These Fears.

 My Memories Are Blocked By A Stonewall.

 You Were The Cause Of My Downfall.

 I Just Wanted To Be Free.

 But You Would Not Let Go Of Me.

 Standing On Pain's Edge.

 I Cannot Break Death's Pledge.

 I Was Broken.

 Your Words Were Left Unspoken.

 My Dreadful Power Is Vicious.

 But Your Wishes Were Delicious.

 

 I Cannot Be Erased.

 My Divine Lamp Cannot Be Misplaced.

 Your Fire Inside Me Is Raging.

 But Our Love Is Always Merging.

 Through My Cursed Veins.

 Your Precious Soul Remains.

 Just Wish Your Life Away.

 But There Is A Price You Always Have To Pay.

 I'm Right Here Never Fading. 

 But You Still Don't Know Where Your Heading.

 Keep Me Close Just Keep Me Confusing.

 I Am Your Perfect Escape Just An Illusion.

 

 Time Will Never Keep Us Apart.

 With Me In Your Heart.

 I Will Never Die Within.

 For I Am Your Immortal Djinn."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

Very powerful! the last parts struck a chord in me...
Great write, friend...


" I'm Right Here Never Fading.
But You Still Don't Know Where Your Heading.
Keep Me Close Just Keep Me Confusing.
I Am Your Perfect Escape Just An Illusion "


Time Will Never Keep Us Apart.
With Me In Your Heart.
I Will Never Die Within.
For I Am Your Immortal Djinn."

[Gaiamethod]

Definitely song lyrics!!! Very good!

[Kat Collins]

Fascinating...Interesting with the capitalization of each word and periods. Very definite. Almost a statement, a declaration. Caught my attention...

[Layla J Omorose]

I think everything that I wanted to say has been said. So I will simply say that this is an awesome poem and I fell in love with the rhythm and rhyme of the poem.

[Lilith Frost]

My Dreadful Power Is Vicious.
But Your Wishes Were Delicious.

This, here, is where I fell in love with this poem. Very nicely written.

[StaRsmacK]

I really enjoyed this. Oh, to exist only to serve others...how dark it must be. There were a few grammatical issues (like "where" instead of "were") but still overall very nicely executed.

[Little Whisper]

"I once held you in my tears"..... gosh... from the very first line I was touched by your poem... to love, be sad, not able to let go... not wanting to go...always there....unconditionally... A rare kind of love to receive.

[Omar Fendri]

I don't know what words I've to add as review after reading this Lyrics. I only wish I will hear it someday as a song...
I love the rhyme that adds beautifulness to your words. The meaning is clear and deep. It's fabulous. I like it :)