Mirror Of Hope

Look Away From Within.

"Held By The Angels Above As Their Tears Shine For Me.

 Creeping Darkness Pulls Me Down Far As I Can See.

 Hunted By The Monsters Of My Past.

 Swinging Wildly To Force Them Into Ash.

 

 Burning Scars Ignite On My Heart.

 Buried In The Sands Of Time Just Lost Apart.

 It Hurts So Much Just As It Would Be As Such.

 Walking With Heaven's Lantern.

 Torn By Hell's Twisted Pattern.

 Shadows Turning Away As I Sway. 

 My Memories Are Silently Waiting.

 My Own Soul Is Fading. 

 I Fall But Keep Falling Alone.

 Just To Keep Holding On.

 I Keep Sliding Down.

 Just So Many Demons Around.

 My Light Is Running Out.

 As I Stand On Top Of The River Of Doubt.

 I Know I Just Keep Looking In Destiny's Scope.

 I See Myself Hanging On The Bottomless Slope.

 But I'm Running Out Of Rope.

 I Just Keep Crying In Front Of The Mirror Of Hope."

 

 

Reviews

[Ang]

Intense! Usually the capitalization of every letter bother's me. But for some reason it didn't here. It seems to actually fit the poem. This piece is very captivating. I want to read more. :) The last stanza is my favorite. It definitely pulls the whole poem together. This piece is sad but I love how you were able to add emotion but not make it so overwhelming. Very well written piece here! Great poem! :)

[Omar Fendri]

Holy Creation... This is A HOLY CREATION, wow ' I just keep crying in front of the mirror of hope' ! wow are you kidding me ! This is a shinning talent... I like every line in this poem cause every line tells a story and every story has its charm.
Spoken heartfelt sadness was yelling aloud from those silent words :) i cherish it :) Fabulous

[Vertigo]

Amazing write...I love the language and meaning in this...it speaks volumes.

[DannyLynne Riley]

ah...I love poetry that takes it's reader on a journey and delivers an end well worth the worded travel...as your does here and I do not hesitate to add it as a favorite to my own personal library...well done..-DannyLynne

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Lovely in that it is deeply emotional...dark yet...You speak of a mirror of hope....everyone should look into it...our journeys are long and hard but the end ..the destination..is..beyond beauty...do not forsake it...and even should You stumble..and wander lost...You will one day find it....
Phenomenal writing ,Jason :)

[Dana Kathryn]

This is a wonderful write..It is very emotive and sad,but it has a relentless fight to it..I can relate to this one very well! This has deep and sobering truth!very good poem indeed!

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem has a huge impact at the end. I think there our times in life when we all feel lost and without enough rope. In life there are many struggles that we have to overcome.

[Poetry Girl]

wow! this is an awesome poem! i mean it, its great! i liked it so much im going to favorite it. i love the rhyme scheme towards the end. i really like the meaning and the word play. its just a great poem and i cant wait to read more to see what others you have, absolutely GREAT job! :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

the readers will love this, I thought you did a wonderful job weaving these images together