Angel Of Despair

No Hope In Finding Love.

"A Mercy Of Shattering Your Dreams And Hopes.                 A

 I Bleed Your World So Desolate.                                      N

 Nothing Will Ever Be The Same For You.                           G

 My Passion Consumed By Your Temptation.                      E

 Together We Are Cursed Forever In Desolation.                L

 As I Break The Collar Around Your Neck.                          O

 I Hold You In My Arms From That Wreak.                         F

 My Tears Burns The Ones That Love You.                        D

 My Wings Are Torn From Saving You.                               E

 I Sacrificed Everything To See You Again.                        S 

 You Will Always Be Alone Within My Wings.                     P

 Hold Onto My Dying Memories.                                        A

 I Cannot Let You Go For I Have Your Broken Heart.           I

 Now That I Have You. You Will Never Find Love."            R

 

Reviews

[Snickers]

I agree with Mrs. Ms. or Miss Sara Mercury. I really liked this very impressive. Keep it up sweetheart.
Dream.

[Sara Mercury]

In this piece, I envision a woman who actually met and consummated the relationship physically with her twin flame. Whilst I wouldn't think the man would really be saying this to the woman, I think this is what she'd be thinking he was saying to her, especially if circumstances made it so that the two of them were separated in life and not set free to be together again by death.

This poem is very dark.

[kewlbluetiger]

This is really a captivating write. The line that struck me was "My Wings Are Torn From Saving You." I think of so many of my relationships where that was true. Amazing work here. I like the little format play with the caps and on the side also. Gave It An Angelic Feel, yet implied a sense of desparation in the write.

[Dawn Jones]

I really like this.
It's got this dark yearning despair to it that speaks ta me through personal experrience. I like the way you've put yer lines together and the 'Angel of Despair' down the side adds something to it that I can't put inta words, but I like all the same.

Thank you for sharing this.