Art Of A Dream

A Woman's Mind Paints The Image Of A Ghost Or Man Within A Picture As She Paints.

Art Of A Dream By Jason

"Even In A Ghost Town Left All Alone I Would Never Be Lost For I Would Be Lead By The Sound Of Your Beautiful Heart And The Sweet Sound Of Your Voice Calling Me. I Will Find My Way To Reality Again As This Forever Dream Has Become A Picture Within My Painting That Has Me Captured For In This Moment I Know That I Will Return To You As You Paint Me As The Picture In Your Mind As I Reach To You Through This Art Of A Dream." 

Author's Note

Keep The Mind Open And Put Your Self As The Painter. With The Image Of The Ghost Or Person As They Are Captured Within Her Mind And The Picture Trying To Escape Into Her World.

Reviews

[Vishuddha]

A curious piece. A strange and eerie world. I am not within the mind of the painter. This is the mind of the ghost. A mind from beyond striving to return but the style seems to intensify that he is no longer like the living. It flows without a breath, as thoughts would flow through one no longer breathing. The capitalization works because of its oddity. (It does not work in every poem.)
I would take out the single period and let it flow from beginning to end.