The Inevitable

Remember those who will remember you.

"Adjacent to this stone I've been holding onto

Falling for a million years...on fire.

(Still)

A moment to reflect on the one I left behind

To rescue the ones who self destruct.

(It)

Cold and foretold to be still with no one

I don't belong there no more as it seems.

(Was)

To save the next future I must transcend history

Go back to see what I missed all this time.

(Worth)

The remarkable love for another is still not lost

We still can remember them in our hearts and soul.

(The)

Darkness has it's way into us all for we have to fight

Light the way with the emotion of not fearing it to the end.

(Sacrifice)

Silence with no recognition as I destroy this cruising dreadnought

It only happens that in tears I still see you amongst the passing stars."

Reviews

[Autumn L Gibbs]

Oh my god! I love it!
I absolutely love the line 'The remarkable love for another is still not lost
we still can remember them in our hearts and soul'
It just struck me right through the heart, lovely. This poem is just lovely!
A.G.

[Jason Shadows]

Sometimes hanging onto the edge of a falling star you can see their face come to life as the stars pass by. Only the image left to remember and or see is the last one in your thoughts. Hope you enjoyed the journey from within the cosmos.

[Autumn L Gibbs]

I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for putting out so I could stumble across it.
A.G.

[Cherrie Palmer]

You have a clever way of giving your poetry the feel of a epic story. Your focus words adds depth to the readers discovery.

[Jason Shadows]

Imagine hanging onto a falling meteor and seeing someone you missed on the passing stars hoping to destroy the one thing that might destroy a near perfect future. One can be lost in the cosmos but yet have a purpose to live. Thanks for the enlightened review Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I always enjoy the words you use to drive your poem.