Chains Of Hope

Drags The Immortal Soul.

"Our arms rest on the fence of disbelief 

 when tragedy plays its haunting melody.

 

 Sadness stands beside me whispering

 all is lost when despair walks in my heart.

 

 Walking under doubt sinks my thoughts

 as the echo of grief reclaims my mind.

 

 Darkness...she kisses me silently smiling

 as her twin ignites her own light in my soul.

 

 I speak the words of misery with tears

 by removing the after glow of torment.

 

 Sanitarium holds my dreams after sleep

 as the flow of secrets i keep poke me.

 

 Remember me they speak in riddles deep

 holding my own chains of hope i cry asleep.

 

 She holds my love within the realm of no return

 so i must step into what i never wanted.

 

 The dark stores away any light that holds

 my intentions for a dream to awake again.

 

 Holding her within my arms i cannot sleep

 for if i do she will fade within the next dawn."

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Tremendous feeling in this. Pain and suffering. "The flow of secrets I keep poke me" Hmm... Why keep secrets from your love? The only way for any relationship to work is by telling the truth. Trust me, it always comes out in the end. Most likely the woman already knows but she's being polite and waiting for her love to come clean... Of course, the window of opportunity to do that varies by woman! Thoughtful writing that shows a vulnerability and passion, stirring this reader

[luciddreamer]

Oh, I like this....true understanding of pain

[Tasha]

Truly beautiful!

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

love this!