If I Leave

Don't Be Sad.

"Walking out into the snowfield i dream

 of holding that special someone again.

 But sorting the decisions i've made error

 my thoughts of letting once love go.

 I tried to live without anger simplified 

 from another missing part picked away.

 Following the footprints into tragic emotion 

 caved in the regret of loosing you here.

 Fences old covered in snow shows 

 memories can be easily forgotten.

 Somehow fate brings me something 

 to recalculate and reconsider to note.

 

 So many walks we made and look

 how far we got ourselves through.

 Tough times calles for desperate measures 

 while being paralysed you walked out on me.

 Never to forget but to remember the later pain

 received breathes into my way of letting go happen.

 It was simple enough to walk away with no words

 but shames seeped out within the real you.

 Leash the emotional side of sorrow with none

 as forgiven welcomes another switch to push.

 Crawling for help i found a phone to call 911

 and at the hospital you didn't show yet called.

 Moving on i saw the letter you left in the snow

 with the words 'if i leave forgive me cause i'm blind to love'."

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

I am a bit...unsure what to write. >.> Dude this is magical like in way of words. And yet I cannot explain how this really spoke to me. So I will just say I liked it and believe it to be thought provoking.

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

" If I leave forgive me cause I'm bline to love"
powerful words... Once given the chance for 'real' love I too was blind. Walked away, with regrets to this day. Nothing can be done, but to live with choices made.
Choose wisely for love is truly a gift

Love this...