Cascade

Into Another Moment.

"Precious the only word hope flushes 

 into dreams that form the illusion reality.

 Turn i turn to you and no words gather

 misery and grief that triumphs my heart.

 Use my world for another escape into 

 sunset desires that cross my desolation.

 Heart rings the path to future investigation 

 where it is right to love yourself without fear.

 Walk with me and white knuckles shine 

 atmospheric nightlight driving chaos.

 Clawing emotionally at will with reached 

 cataclysmic portions clinging to power.

 Simple decisions smoother endless actions 

 leeching forever in passions scattered wings.

 Deleting past mistakes can erupt the future

 not knowing but forgetting the conclusion.

 Broken but never bruised levels temptation 

 following the cries of my sad once ghost.

 Now standing alone at the end of the world

 it was me who was the key to this apocalypse.

 My heart surrounded by darkness crushing it

 with the light bleeding inside under no hope.

 If i must fade so shall this world for none

 shall gain access to my forgotten soul.

 I am light and darkness in one together

 we are forever into eternity's arms.

 We become the strong with love flying

 above as the demons under the earth rise.

 To claim what they can never have again

 for if so let us cascade into fates embrace.

 My name is forsaken and my words disappear 

 but in your heart i unleash loves true power...fear."

Reviews

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

the last bit of this from Deleting past mistakes til the end, captured my attention.
Powerful write my friend!

the last two lines, - The feeling behind the words will never fade, thus keeping the words within the heart of who it was given.

Fear, is such a powerful emotion and one that needs overcame. Within the love of two complete, I believe it can be

[C.C. Marx]

Beautifully expressed, the deep emotion really makes the poem

[C.C. Marx]

I really like this one every line made me want to read more, my attention was captured

[PP]

Such a deep poem, the words shoot out as one reads! Great job with this one.
My fab line:

My heart surrounded by darkness crushing it
with the light bleeding inside under no hope.

[Jason Shadows]

thanks i wrote this one through if the 'ones' heart would die then the apocalypse start forcing it to happen but in the post world would love be forgotten or lost?

[PP]

Guess love will last till the end of the world and beyond! It might die the day living being stop to reproduce! Because no one can vacate the feeling of love that a mother beholds for her child. Love in some or the other form will continue to thrive!

[Jason Shadows]

the end results to this poem is that the one telling this moment is really 'you' the reader - for the structure and concept from this is that love and darkness is within us all. it's up to you in order how you use it's power.

[PP]

I totally agree with you on this one! Very deep thoughts indeed!