Society

Message about how everyone is always there to judge you for doing something you want

Have you ever felt suffocated?
By opinions and judgements that you hated.
Pressurized and haunted.
Also by people getting taunted.
Don't I have any rights?
My mind says there is no use of these fights.

All their fingers pointing at me.
Leave me alone, let me be.
Where were the people when I had no one?
Petty rumours about me are no fun.
Be mindful of what people might say.
A part of me kept dying each day.

Don't blame me for a heart of stone.
The reasons for that should be known.
You judged every move I made.
At a time of distress, there was no aid.
Why am I still being hunted?
Haven't I done everything society wanted?

Author's Note

Would appreciate a review.
Thanks

Reviews

[Lorry]

Everyone has an opinion and dorsn't mind telling you, as if they are some zen god/godess/other. I find it useful to be as blunt as they are and it usually helps next time they think of telling you hoe you are wrong and they are right.
Only listen to the opinions of people you trust and know have your best interests in mind. The rest is all just white noise. Irritating and annoying as hell, but white noise all the same .
Change for no one friend, unless your heart demands it.

[Jasnil Chand]

Lorry😊
Everything that you have written is absolutely true.. Thanks for that I really needed it
Appreciate it

[Abhishek Izy]

Nice Write. The questions it seeks and the anguish is so understandable. Liked the flow and how you brought it to the end. Good Work, my friend

[Jasnil Chand]

Thank You Abhishek.. Really appreciate it😊

[KevinKevz]

Apparently, we live in a judgmental society. But you should learn how to filter everything from what is constructive and destructive to you. You are brilliant, it's just the society who is ugly.

[Jasnil Chand]

Thanks for that Kev.. Really appreciate you taking out time to review my work and helping me out
read moreThanks for that Kev.. Really appreciate you taking out time to review my work and helping me out
Yes but I am resilient so I do not bother about what people have to say