To bend and break

To bend and break

A Poem by AnxietyWithAttitudex
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Another original about mental health

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[ To break and bend ]

To break and bend
Is not a trend.
Mental health is not "cool"
Please don't be a fool

Anorexia isn't a choice
Anxiety with an unknown voice.
You think your overweight
But really you're great.

Anxiety isn't a joke
To those who haven't spoke.
They are simply not shy
But lack confidence to get by.

Depression isn't just being sad
Its when there's no good but only bad.
Thoughts are pessimistic none good,
Leaving no choice but to shed blood.

Mental health is evidently real,
We're not just lazy it's how we feel.
So watch your words when speaking aloud,
As it is hard enough to be in the crowd.

© 2018 AnxietyWithAttitudex


Author's Note

AnxietyWithAttitudex
Ignore grammar

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I wrote something about ignoring the grammar being it's important to your message and how it comes across. But...

I'm not totally sure what "Mental health is not "cool" Please don't be a fool" means but I get the gist of what you're saying. You've given us examples from different elements of mental health and what can go wrong in the mind for some.

It IS horrible that people have to go through those kinds of things. Like a chain around the neck, it deters one from being happy in life.

With the exception of some grammar and possible sentence structure errors :) you did a fine job on this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


you've certainly touched upon some difficult things to deal with in life. i like how you portray them and their effects head-on with honesty and offering an explanation ... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


AnxietyWithAttitudex

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words! :)

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Added on October 3, 2018
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