Hurt

Pure as my feelings towards you

Feeling I cannot get pass through

For it is true 

that love 'is as perennial as the grass"

The heart that does not know how to stop

Can death be the answer?

If the beating cease,

Can love be surpassed?

Or will it be the riposte 

To this binding soul?

For they say,

Love is eternal

When love is pure.

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Incredible poem Jasmin and emotionally raw and truthful. Love is in all these things and more. It's the worst and it's the best. It is in constant conflict and yet perfect unity. Love is love. Thank you for sharing your art in words.

[Jasmin]

Thank you Carlos for the review!