Old Memory

You got my mind

Wrapped in your sublime reality. 

The echoes of your existence 

Into nothingness

Vanishing the light that blinded me.

For your wisps of your decaying soul

That trapped me into this illusion

I do not want to be 

Neither wanted to keep.

While your presence still remain

Your voice still resounding through the rain

And even through my sunshine

You still remain.

And so I surrender

keeping you away forever.

If you want to stay 

My mind will always be here

To feel this agony 

That still lingers.

Reviews

[cor.empire]

"You got my mind
Wrapped in your sublime reality.
The echoes of your existence
Into nothingness
Vanishing the light that blinded me.'

wonderful poem...express yourself!

[Jasmin]

Thank you cor.empire for the review!

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Memories of love can be so painful to let go. And even so they never truly leave because they will always linger in your heart. That is part of loving someone so much. Thank you Jasmin for sharing your poem.

[Jasmin]

Thank you Carlos for the review!

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I remember feeling these powerful memories of a love in my past and your poem really spoke to me of those times. Good art always does that for those who read the words and feel their meaning. Thank you.

[Jasmin]

I will keep on writing. Thank you for the encouragement as always.