Moonlight and I

Moonlight and I

A Poem by Jasmin

Surrounded by people,
Still I feel alone. 
Dipped by the moonlight,
I found my only friend.

I realized, that my friend is only me
and the moon.
I spoke with her and cried
This feeling of aloofness I still do not know.

How can I express the feeling, 
Feeling that cannot be explained?
When the friends I can rely
Are the moon and the trees?

Such a sweet surprise!
Such a beautiful demise!
To look into myself,
With the moonlight and I!

© 2021 Jasmin


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befriend with nature and you will never feel alone...
a well expressed piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jasmin

3 Years Ago

Thank you cor,empire for the review!
This is a lovely and inspiring poem. To find a sense of kinship within nature to alleviate a lonely soul. Thank you for sharing this poem of yours.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jasmin

3 Years Ago

Thank you Carlos L. Estrada for the review!
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome I wish you continued success in your wonderful writing journey.
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I can relate to so many lines here, an awesome poem Jasmin.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jasmin

3 Years Ago

Thank you ved for the review!

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Added on August 13, 2021
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Tags: Feel, Life

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Jasmin

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