Alcohol

You drank me up

so greedy

so complete

like you simpely couldn't get enough

 

And then you got tired of my taste

and spit me out

like I was the dirtiest, poisonous mix

of love, trust and warmth

of something you've never known

 

And there I was lying on the floor

dripping 

besides the broken, empty bottle of my body

liquid

so sour, so bitter

 

They all say alcohol is the problem

but maybe you weren't ready to drink 

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice metaphor of alcohol. I liked the usage of it, I was awestruck to read this. I liked it a lot.

[Jasmijn]

Thank you so much! This is my first poem on this site !

[Najam Us Saher]

And a very good one 😀
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