The Real Love

Love is what, that u care,
Not that u kept as spare,
Love is what, that gives u living,
It's not a matter of taking,
It's a matter of giving.
Love is what, that gives u respect,
Removes from u the tag of suspect,
Love is what, that gives u belief,
It's the way of giving relief,
Love is what,to share bond,
Not to keep every bit unfold,
Love is what, that makes u Passionate,
It's up to u how u decorate,
Love is what , that makes u humble,
Don't allow the faith on u to crumble,
Love is what, that have no limit,
Believe and hymn it,
So love ur love,
Becoz u love to be loved.

Reviews

[Jon Solis]

Hello Jasbir.

It is a complex, emotionally strong and deep prose/ poecy to transmit in a language that is perhaps not native to you. I urge you to read and re-read it for rythm, some word choice and grammar. It has great potential to transmit something true and honest.

I have no doubt that in your native language; this reaches with greater gravitas than in English.

Please accept this with good intention.

Jon.

...You will require no rating once you have read several times your own edit.

[Jasbir Kaur]

Ok sir, i will proceed as you said.
Thank you for guidance

[Valentine]

We all need to love others and to be loved in return. Valentine

[Jasbir Kaur]

That's true. I also think so valentine.
Jasbir

[Swati Nayak]

I am not kidding but I fell in love with this poem,
nice definition of love.

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you so much swati

[Ashish]

Love Love and only Love..
#feelingloved :)

[Jasbir Kaur]

Thank you ashish